Mary DeSantis, fiction editor. Unpacking and Detoxing Stories


Welcome to Kit ‘N Kabookle!

I’m in a book, and I’m excited about it!

Perfect Potions from Perfectly Poisoned Press is 11 stories about, well, potions. My story includes an elf in pink tights, too much chemistry homework, and lots of ominous purple fog. Only available for a limited time!

cover of Perfect Potions from Perfectly Poisoned Anthologies
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Unpacking: Great fiction should be like a present, pretty on the outside with a big reveal inside.

Detoxing: Great fiction should be like a healthy diet: balanced and filling.

~Why? I’m so glad you asked…

I’m Mary, and I’m here to make your story its best version. Contact me at to start your project down the road to success.

~Check out my editing services here


I blog about writing/publishing and feature books by both indie and traditionally published authors.

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